Tuesday, October 30, 2007

Tell It To Me Now...

Tell it to me now...
I can see it in your eyes what you won't say out loud.
Tell it to me now...
Before the silence wraps the night in its shroud.

I can feel the anguish in the air,
The screams, The pain, The flowing tears,
That hide behind this fake smile.
Tell it me now...
Let me into your secrets, maybe just for a while.

There's something missing in that laugh,
Isn't bubbling over like it used to,
You just try too hard to make it justify your tears.
Tell it to me now...
I'm here tonight, tell me about your fears.

Tell it to me now...
I can see it in your eyes.
Tell it to me now...
Just give up on all the lies.
Tell it to me now...
Before we say our goodbyes.
Tell it to me now....

P.S: For all those nice people who get concerned about anything mildly disturbing I write...this is a total work of fiction. No resemblance or connections to my life anywhere. But it's nice knowing you care and all. Until next time...Take care and enjoy the festive season!!

7 Comments:

Sumi said...

Tell it to me now...
That there'll be no goodbyes.
Tell it to me now...
That happiness is all this love comprise.

Love you :)

Adicrazy said...

Amazing.

The details in these lines make me wonder..."there's something missing in that laugh...." - not many ppl notice that in real life...I guess. Nice work pal. Keep writing. :)

PS: Thanks for the PS note, else I would have given some idiotic gyan on life :P

Adicrazy said...

...And thanks a ton for visiting my blog. :)

MeMyself_n_I said...

these days lines like those strangely make a lot of sense. :-)

incidentally, you've been tagged.

Unknown said...

Your PS caught my eye... wish I could put something like that.. but I couldn't care less.

Nice stuff you write.

kapilnaik said...

cool man nice blog...
nice background btw.....and amazing writing...

Lucky said...

i came across ur blog on orkut thru the bloggers community...
awesome poem..
u write well..
i enjoyed reading sum of ur posts...